Saturday, May 26, 2012

Blog #11

Revised Dialogue Draft



INT. MASSAGE PARLOR-DAY

Scene opens as the camera focusses in on a man’s face that is resting in the head support of a massage table. A serene look graces the man’s face.

The camera shows PHOEBE giving a massage to the man on the table.

Soft music is playing in the background.

The flicker of candles can be seen dancing against the walls and ceiling.

The massage ends after about one minute into the scene.

PHOEBE
(In a whisper)
Thank you so much for coming. See you soon.

PHOEBE exits room.

Waiting in the lobby is PHOEBE’s husband MIKE. He is smiling and holding a single daisy that is being hidden behind his back.

PHOEBE
(Walking toward him with a flirtatious grin on her face)
Hi sweetie!
PHOEBE leans toward MIKE and gives him a smooch on the cheek.

MIKE reveals the daisy that he was hidden behind his back. He kisses her back and smiles.

MIKE
How is your day going?

PHOEBE
Great, but really busy. I have an hour before my next appointment. Are you hungry?

MIKE
Yes, that is exactly why I came. How does Italian sound to you?

PHOEBE
(Rubbing her stomach)
Perfect. I am starved.

While at the Italian restaurant, PHOEBE pulls out her iPhone and starts to read an email to MIKE.

PHOEBE
(Reading email on phone)
Dear Pheebes-
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to invite you to the premier of my new movie. It is a romantic comedy about a plumber that falls in love with a millionaire heiress after fixing a leak under her bathroom sink. The female lead actress is a hottie!
It is next Thursday, so get yourself to LA.
See you soon.
Love,
Joey

PHOEBE puts phone on the table and looks up to see MIKE’s reaction.

MIKE
(Smiling)
Sounds like fun!

PHOEBE
I will book our flight when I get home tonight.

MIKE
It will be great to see everyone. It has been way too long.

PHOEBE
(Nodding in agreement)
Yes it has, yes it has.

Camera pans out the restaurant window and fades to black as taxi cabs and other cars drive by.

Blog #10


CHANDLER
Where are the stinking tickets?

ERICA
Oh, are you talking about these (sarcastically) tickets Daddy?

CHANDLER
Yes princess, these are the tickets.

Pilot
It looks like we have clear sky all the way to California. We will be arriving in Los Angeles around 4:32 p.m. local time. Now sit back and enjoy the flight.

Ticket Agent
Due to severe weather in the Midwest, Flight 828 will be delayed until 11:30 a.m. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Blog #9


PHOEBE
Hi sweetie!

MIKE
How is your day going?

PHOEBE
Great, but really busy. I have an hour before my next appointment. Are you hungry?

MIKE
Yes, that is exactly why I came. How does Italian sound to you?

PHOEBE
Perfect. I am starved.

While at the Italian restaurant, PHOEBE pulls out her iPhone and starts to read an email to MIKE.

PHOEBE
Dear Pheebes-
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to invite you to the premier of my new movie. It is a romantic comedy about a plumber that falls in love with a millionaire heiress after fixing a leak under her bathroom sink. The female lead actress is a hottie!
It is next Thursday, so get yourself to LA.
See you soon.
Love,
Joey


MIKE
Sounds like fun!

Blog #8

1.) Good dialogue, keeps the story moving foward.
2.) Defines the relationships bewtween characters- emotional, physical, background.
3.) Monologue- shows characters private feelings. Sometimes can be shown in form of a voice over.

Blog #7

Opening Scene
Fast foward 10 years, the scene opens up to a backyard in the New York City suburbs. There are two small children- one boy and one girl, around 10 years old playing on a swing set. Its is a beautiful fall day and the sun has begun to set. Through the kitchen window, a women can be seen washing off vegetables to be placed om a simmering pot on the stove. The camera pans  down the driveway to see a black SUV slowly pull in. The two children quickly take note of the car and immediately rush to the driver side door.

Setting of Story
New York City, New York City suburbs, Los Angeles, various airports, hotel

Getting to know the Characters
Ross and Rachel decide to give it another try with their relationship after toss confesses his love to Rachel. They have two girls now, Emma and Zoey, still live in New York.

Monica and Chandler are adjusting to life with twins- Jack and Erica- and their new life living outside New York City.

Joey continues to pursue his career in acting and head to Los Angels to star in his own sitcom.

Phoebe marries Mike in a ceremony performed by Joey in Central Park.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Blog #5 Revised Log Line

A high school graduate orchestrates a large cheating scandal under the noses of the police, who are looking for the culprit.

Friday, March 30, 2012

Blog #4 Log line

A high school graduate orchestrates a large cheating scandal under the noses of the police, who are looking for the culprit.